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 Team ByteMe
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-We're Bhavna and Josephine, here to have some fun while making cool stuff. We met at Carnegie Mellon University's Master of
-Entertainment Technology Program, and have been friends ever since. Bhavna is a coder, Josephine is a designer, and we both like music
+We're Bhavna and Josephine, here to have some fun while making cool stuff that people use. We met at Carnegie Mellon University's Master of
+Entertainment Technology Program, and have been friends ever since. Bhavna is a coder; Josephine is a designer; we both like music,
 games, and art, so it really is a match made in tech heaven!
 
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